Category: Writers Block
There's something about those eyes of yours;
they burn so deep into my core,
and as you speak words we both don't know,
our hearts beat in unison at an unsteady go.
Something's not right; deep inside, I know
that that it's too good to be true; I must go.
You raped my mind;
you stole my sanity!
You raped my mind;
have you no humanity?!
…And I can feel you bring me down;
your words, they hold me to the ground.
I fell in love with the you I thought I knew,
and I'm still in love, but I see right through
your masked disguise and blinding eyes;
I'm hypnotized by your lies!
You raped my mind;
you stole my sanity!
You raped my mind;
have you no humanity?!
You raped my mind;
you stole my sanity!
You raped my mind;
have you no humanity?!…
Wow! I love it very powerful and emotive..
Gosh you're good Mel. Thsi sounds like a song to me...do you have notes for it, and music, and what not? I'd love to hear ya sing it. Awesome girl you're going places with yoru stuff! XOXOXXOXOXXX!
No, it has no tune; it's not a song. It's just another poem about depression I'm going through. I'm not gonna turn it into a song 'cause it's not a Christian one, and I can't even think of a tune anyway, LOL...
That deserves to be a song good luck mate and to a fellow sufferer if you ever want to talk, you know where I am.smile.
Hehehe, thanks, Alex.
no problem and I'm serious..smile